#75: Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 10



 
     

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Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 10

Tuesday, August 26, 2008 - 7:45 PM
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Well, here we are at comic strip number 75. I hate to make a big deal out of all of these supposed little milestones, but believe me, if you take into account my lack of productivity over the last eight years, it's definitely worth it to me to point them out. This is also the 30th comic strip I've done this year. Wow, 30! The most strips I'd ever done in a single year before 2008 was 12, so that's pretty exciting. I hope to keep them coming!

Also, for the record, I very easily could have cheated on panels two and five, since Stu kicking down doors has become something of a running gag. I thought about stealing a panel from a previous instance of the gag, but decided to do some real drawing and hone my skills instead.

A friend of mine at work is going to let me borrow his Wacom tablet. For years, I've sworn off Wacom tablets because I really enjoy hand inking. But now that I have a real opportunity to use one, I might do some sketches and try my hand at digital inking. I'll be sure to post the sketches here for your perusal.

Thank you very much for reading, and here's to 75 successful comic strips. See you next time!


Brian

Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 9

Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 7:02 PM
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Well, the first panel took an incredibly long time to draw, but other than that, things went pretty smoothly with this strip. I still need to learn a combination of editing my dialogue down a bit and planning and structuring the panels to better accomodate the dialogue so the word bubbles don't cover up too much artwork. Seriously, I spent a lot of time on that artwork--I want people to see it!

Honestly, I don't have much else to report this time around. Maybe this week I'll have a chance to do a little "more" for the comic, like I talked about a couple of weeks ago.

I'm gonna go find something to eat. Thanks for reading, and check in again next week for strip number 75! Wow, that seems like so many comics, and yet so few at the same time. Ah well.


Brian

Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 8

Tuesday, August 19, 2008 - 7:25 PM
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Ah, no opportunity for cheating this time around. Lots of drawing, and it felt good to really have to work hard at it for the first time in a few weeks. Not only could I not copy and paste anything, but there was also a fight scene. I must admit that the fight scenes never look quite as good as I envision them, but this one is still all right.

One of the advantages of doing a long-form comic like CNMB is that there's not always a need for a punchline at the end of every strip. While I always prefer to end any given strip with a really good zinger, the fact that CNMB reads more like a comic book or graphic novel than a strip allows me to move the funny parts around if I need to. This strip, for example, starts off with a (hopefully) humorous sight gag, and then there's a fight, and then there's story progression at the end. My original idea for this particular strip did have a punchline at the end, but then I came up with this idea and liked it a lot better, so I went with it, instead. I think it turned out okay.

Once again, I failed to do a mid-week blog entry last week. I'll go ahead and say this week isn't looking good, but you never know.

We're getting into mid-August here, so a number of my friends will be heading back to school (either to learn or teach), and the more summery activities will be slowing down soon. I must say it was a pretty good summer, and I can honestly say I was never bored. If I wasn't at a wedding, float trip, barbecue, ball game, movie, on a road trip, or just generally hanging out with friends or family, I was keeping busy doing my own thing--making comics, writing, exercising, taking a solo road trip, fulfulling other responsibilities, or something along those lines. It's been a few years since I've had a summer in which I've gained so much appreciation for my friends and realized how great it is to have them in my life. On top of that, I feel better about myself than I have in years, probably since 2004, which has gone on record among my friends as being the greatest summer of all time. I worry less and find myself overcoming more and more inhibitions. I'm still not quite to where I want to be, but for once, I feel really good about where I'm going. I was even so lucky as to attract the attention of a very special young lady, which has made summer that much more wonderful. :)

But now that things are probably going to slow down a little bit, it's definitely time to further devote myself to the comic strip and hope that the positive feelings I have now carry on into the remainder of the year and help to keep me passionate and motivated about what I'm doing. I think back to how much progress I've already made this year compared to years past, and it's really exciting to think about where I might be able to go with this if I keep at it. I still have a lot of improvements to make, but at least I can face them with a smidge of confidence.

Let's go.


Brian

Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 7

Tuesday, August 5, 2008 - 7:55 PM
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Yeah, okay, so it's pretty clear that I blatantly cheated on the artwork on this one, but this strip has been in my head for awhile now, so I swear it wasn't a matter of me being lazy or anything like that.

Life has been pretty crazy for the past couple of weeks. I was out of town for the second straight weekend, and now I'm even more exhausted than I already was. However, it looks like things are going to slow down a little bit now, and I'm hoping that I'm finally going to have more time to devote to the comic. In this case, I'm not just talking about trying to get to a point where I'm doing two strips a week, but also just doing more for the comic. Because right now, I'm not doing enough. I haven't done any promotion for a couple of months now, and things just feel stagnant, despite the fact that I'm still making strips. I want to bring in more readers and develop a better rapport with the readers I have now--be more personal, write more blogs, try to come up with some extra little goodies, etc. The only problem is I'm still not entirely sure how to go about doing that.

Sounds like it might already be time to re-read How to Make Webcomics. I'm kinda looking forward to it.

I'm done here for the evening, but maybe I can find some time to return before next week with a blog, if nothing else. Thanks for reading, and I'll see you next time!


Brian

A Villainous Interjection

Tuesday, July 29, 2008 - 8:00 PM
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Hello! After fulfulling my other, more pressing responsibilities and taking a much needed vacation to Chicago to visit my brother and sister-in-law, I have finally returned with a new comic strip. I already feel like I have to apologize--there is so much dialogue going on in this one that it's hard to even see anything, but hopefully you still get the gist of it. I'm gonna have to start doing a better job of editing things down. That or just planning things out a little bit better.

Also, I hope you don't think all of the silhouettes of the Goonish High Council are just copouts because I'm too lazy to design some new characters--that's intentional. I've always liked the idea of an evil, mysterious council of doom that's all dark and shadowy, even when they're standing in broad daylight.

It took my awhile to get back into the groove of drawing after taking a week off. But once I got into it, I remembered how much I like it and got excited again.

Next on the agenda is working ahead on the story--I'm still at a point where I know what's coming, but I don't have it planned out strip for strip. I would feel much better about where the story is going if I did that.

Sorry once again for the missed update. Thanks for your continued support! I'll be back next week with another new strip.


Brian

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT - no new comic strip this week!

Tuesday, July 22, 2008 - 12:59 AM
[Update by Brian]

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Well, I hadn't missed an update since April, and I was feeling pretty good about my consistency here lately, but all of a sudden, things just piled up a little bit too much, and some other, more important responsibilities took precedence over the strip. Therefore, the next installment of Chewy Ninja Monkey Bars will come to you next Tuesday, July 29. Despite this minor setback, I still feel really good about the direction of the comic strip, as well as my dedication to working on it every week. (I'm also still on pace to reach my end-of-year goal, although I have a little less leeway to work with now.)

But man, it still sucks to have to miss an update. I'd go ahead and do it, but I really, really need to get some sleep. I know that even the best webcartoonists miss an update here and there, particularly the ones with lives and dayjobs away from their strips. But it still feels like I'm letting you guys down. I'm really sorry about the delay, and I hope I'll be able to make it up to you with some quality strips in the coming weeks.

Thanks for your continued support of the strip! I will see you next week!


Brian

Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 6

Tuesday, July 15, 2008 - 7:37 PM
[Update by Brian]

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Can't talk--All-Star Game.

I'll be back later this week with a REAL blog entry.


Brian

Behind the Scenes 3

Tuesday, July 8, 2008 - 7:27 PM
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I thought maybe I would give you guys a break from all of these drama-heavy strips with a little behind-the-scenes hijinks.

A little backstory on this one: on a Monday last fall, my friends Katie and Cole and I were going to meet at my place and go see our friend Josh coach a JV football game in Scott City. My doorbell rang, and I answered it thinking it was them. It turns out it was this meat salesman. Allegedly, a regular customer of his down the street, the Vernucci family (or something like that), had a completely full freezer and couldn't accept their entire order. Thus, the salesman was going door to door trying to sell off the part of their order they couldn't accept. Well, I love meat, but my suspicions were aroused by a number of factors:

1) I could not verify the existence or non-existence of the Vernucci family.
2) The salesman could produce no documentation proving the legitimacy of the business.
3) The truck was unmarked.
4) It was raining--if it was a scam, nobody in any of the other houses would come out in the wet to help me if I needed it.

I refused everything and just sent the guy on his way. As we headed to Scott City, I told Katie and Cole about what happened and considered the possibility that the dude wasn't a meat salesman at all, or perhaps a seller of human meat products, and that he was probably trying to kill or kidnap me. In hindsight I thought the whole incident was pretty funny and thought it might make a good comic strip in the future. And here we are.

And nobody take this thing the wrong way just because it appears as though I am to become mincemeat in the last panel. I assure you I'm really not that morbid, nor do I have any desire to die or anything like that. It's all in good fun. :)

Back to action next week. Thanks for reading, and I'll see you then!


Brian

Rise to Power, Part 6

Tuesday, July 1, 2008 - 7:36 PM
[Update by Brian]

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Finally, the epic conclusion to our flashback.

Okay, if I wasn't already out of it last week, I definitely am this week as I recover from an absurdly awesome camping trip over the weekend. I was already suffering from an incredible lack of sleep, and the camping trip compounded that even further. And with the 4th of July occupying the coming weekend, things may get even worse before they get better. Ah well--it's all worth it. The only problem is I'm still having problems finding time to do site promotion and all of that good stuff that goes along with making a webcomic besides...y'know, making the webcomic. But pretty soon, maybe I can really get going again.

I got nothin' else! Thanks for reading, and maybe we'll be getting back to some serious action pretty soon now.


Brian

Rise to Power, Part 5

Tuesday, June 24, 2008 - 7:29 PM
[Update by Brian]

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As if making this comic strip wasn't sad and poignant enough, Don Henley's "New York Minute" came on my .mp3 player as I was working on it. I don't know what it is about music always seeming to sync up appropriately with things that I do or things that happen around me, but it can't just be coincidence.

This comic strip comes at an interesting time for me--I feel like if something like this happens in the story, it should come at a time when I'm feeling all depressed and in the dumps in reality. But it turns out I actually feel better than I have in a very long time. My good friends Katie and Andy got married over the weekend--it was bound to happen for these two sooner or later (well, we had known it was coming for awhile now), and to see them finally seal the deal and to see them that happy...well, maybe the feeling is a little contagious. For me, anyway. On top of that, I had more fun at the reception than I've had in a long time, so that didn't hurt, either. They're wonderful people and they deserve absolutely nothing but the best. Congratulations, guys!

I don't have much else to report as far as the strip goes. I really need to get back on the promotion trail and get the strip out there for people to read. I've been slacking off a little bit lately--there's been a lot going on. So I'm gonna try to work on that, and on that note, if you ever feel the need to tell your friends to check out the strip, please don't hesitate.

That's all for now! Thanks for reading and I'll be back soon.


Brian

Rise to Power, Part 4

Tuesday, June 17, 2008 - 7:45 PM
[Update by Brian]

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New comic is up, and before the 8:00 hour, even! I think that's only been done once or twice since switching to the Tuesday schedule. This one ain't too funny, and the next one won't be, either. But I hope they are compelling, at the very least.

Astute readers may recall in Strip #5 that Stu mentioned an incident involving trolleys. Perhaps some light will be shed on this mysterious event? Next week, mayhaps? I dunno...we'll see!

Also, if you're dedicated enough to have read some of those past issues, you'll notice the actual words are only barely legible (if that). I'm thinking about maybe going back and replacing all of the lousy, hand-drawn word balloons with digital ones so that new readers interested in familiarizing themselves with the archive can do so with ease. In those days, I just didn't consider the appearance of the word balloons to be so important to the strip. However, I foresee this endeavor being potentially difficult because some story details may have changed since some of the early dialogue (namely some pieces of Stu's origin), and I'm conflicted on whether or not to change things in the older strips to reflect what eventually happens in the more recent strips. I probably won't, because in a comic strip like this in which ideas have been perpetually bouncing around in my head like a years long game of Pong, I think some ideas and story elements are just naturally going to change and evolve over time. It still stinks, though, because to me, it doesn't feel like everything is coming together perfectly. I feel like I've retconned, which isn't a horrible sin or anything in my mind, but it's still not perfect. In all honesty, I should probably just not be so hard on myself.

Also, the fact that I was an English major will tempt me to change bad grammar and such. But if I do end up going back and essentially "cleaning up" the text, I think I'll be able to resist all of these urges and leave things the way they are. Just more readable. Aesthetic changes are okay, but other than that, things need to stay the same.

That's all I know. I'll be back next week with a new strip, and maybe sometime in between with a blog or some minor updates. Thanks for reading!


Brian

Decided not to add Twitter...for now.

Thursday, June 12, 2008 - 11:42 PM
[Update by Brian]

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So I was about to put one of the little Twitter feeds over on the side bar. If you don't know what Twitter is, it's a social networking service in which you basically sum up what you're doing at any given moment in 140 characters or less. It's like the little status update things you can do on Facebook or Myspace, only you can show off your status updates wherever you want by adding a little widget to your website that updates itself whenever you update your status.

It seems like sort of a fun thing to do. I went ahead and signed up, and it's cool that I can see what people I'm interested in are up to. But as far as putting on the site, well, maybe now is not the time for the following reasons:

1) I don't know anybody personally on Twitter.
2) I don't know if anybody who looks at this site uses Twitter. I want to use Twitter at least in part for promotion of the comic strip, and I don't see that going too well at the moment.
3) I'm already inundated with social networking services and obsess over them on a daily basis--adding another feels like I might be overdoing it a bit.

I believe it may be more useful in the future, but for now, I think I'll limit my use of Twitter to personal amusement only. Also, I looked at the site with the Twitter widget applied, and it sort of made things look messy. I had it over on the side bar, and if I'm going to add anything else over there, I may need to make some graphic or layout adjustments, because it was starting to look like a Tetris board when the blocks get near the top and you start to panic and throw stuff everywhere. I may need to add some sort of box or containment unit over there to keep things looking a little neater and more professional. I will revisit the idea in the near future when time allows it.

Welp, I gotta get to bed. I should do these blog entry things more often.


Brian

Rise to Power, Part 3

Tuesday, June 10, 2008 - 8:05 PM
[Update by Brian]

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Again, I apologize for all of the narration. However, I assure you that it's all worth it, so make sure to read every last word of it, you lazy bums!

This strip is the 20th of the year. I'm well on my way to doubling the production of my most productive year. Sad, isn't it? Yeah, I know. My actual goal for the year is to double the number of strips in the archive. There were 45 at the start of the year, so I need to get to 90 by the end of the year. If I keep up my current pace, that shouldn't be a problem. Hooray!

I wasn't too thrilled with the artwork in this one, but to be honest, there just wasn't a whole lot of artwork to begin with, so I guess it doesn't bother me too much. I am, however, extremely proud of the logo for the Hired Goon Association. If the strip ever becomes popular enough for its own line of merchandise, you can bet there will be some HGA items for sale.

My comments last week about possibly switching to a twice-a-week format generated some discussion on the forum, which I then followed up with a question about the current pacing of the strip. I was wondering if the pacing has improved at all--I know it used to be a problem and I've been putting legitimate effort into improving. So check it out and let me know what you think!

I plan on adding a Twitter feed to the site within the next week sometime. I don't know if anybody who comes here uses Twitter or not, but you should follow me when I get it set up. I'll let you know.

That's it for this time around. Thanks for reading! I know there was a lot of it this week.


Brian

Rise to Power, Part 2

Tuesday, June 3, 2008 - 8:10 PM
[Update by Brian]

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Well, as long as he admitted it was stupid, I guess I can let it slide....

I've fleshed out the story of the strip for what will probably end up being the next couple of months, and it looks like we're going to learn even more about Stu's mysterious past than I originally thought! What can we expect to find out, you ask? That's a good question that may or may not be answered next week.

Sorry about all of the narration--it's just gotta be done sometimes.

I'm really starting to put serious thought into switching to a twice-a-week format. Before I do this, I'm going to need to build up a bit of a buffer so if I get really busy in the future, I'll have some strips to fall back on if I don't have time to draw two comics every week. Right now I do all of my work on Monday night and Tuesday evening. But if I can put a couple of hours a night a few additional nights a week into the strip, I think I'll be able to manage two a week once I have a buffer. This is a sign that I'm getting better with managing my time, and I'm proud of that. Only drawing one strip a week was an incredible and frustrating grind at first, but it has definitely gotten much better since then.

Now that I have the strip planned out a little better, I'm really excited about where it's going, which is probably contributing to me wanting to do two strips a week so we can get rolling. However, it's going to take some time to prepare for the change, and then even more time to settle in to the change once it happens, so bear with me. I really hope I'm able to do it!

Thanks a lot for stopping by! I'll be speaking with you again soon!


Brian

Rise to Power, Part 1

Tuesday, May 27, 2008 - 7:48 PM
[Update by Brian]

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We interrupt our current story arc, Stu Versus San Francisco, to bring you the exciting flashback, Rise to Power. Looks like we're going to find out how Mayor Pratt gets away with what he does, how Stu got on his bad side, and perhaps a little more of Stu's mysterious past, as well. Stay tuned! Or whatever the internet equivalent of "stay tuned" is.

That last panel looked a lot cooler in my head--it still turned out all right, I guess, but not quite how I originally envisioned it. Astute readers may recognize the design of the building--it's based on something in one of my favorite video games.

Also, if you missed the update on Saturday, you might find a couple of new and updated character bios on the cast page.

As always, thanks very much for reading, and the next installment is coming soon!


Brian

Cast page updated at last!

Saturday, May 24, 2008 - 2:49 PM
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The cast page has been totally revamped with some all-new character entries, some updated character entries, and new pictures! It looks a lot better now--all the pictures are the same size, which gives it a much more polished and professional look (sorta).

Also, at the request of some readers, I removed the "WHO?" from below my name on the title graphic. They told me I should be proud of my work (and I am) and to let others know that I'm proud of my work, and that self-deprecation shouldn't be included in one of the very first things you see when you look at the site. And they're right, of course.

That's all for now! More comics are on the way!


Brian

Editorial Changes!

Wednesday, May 21, 2008 - 11:30 PM
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You know how I was disappointed because the most recent strip was sloppy? Well, I went back in and added three things that I forgot to do, and I feel a lot better now. I don't really like doing that, but it was really driving me crazy that I had forgot this stuff! See if you can find the changes! (Hint: They're all in the last panel.)

With Memorial Day coming up, as well as some more free time here and there, I'm going to try to make some long-anticipated (by me, anyway) updates to the site in the next few days. Will it really happen?! Stay tuned to find out!


Brian

Stu Versus San Francisco, Part 5

Tuesday, May 20, 2008 - 8:50 PM
[Update by Brian]

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Ugh...sorry this one is so late. Let's hear it for last-minute script re-writes.

This one is a little sloppy--I was running out of time, plus I'm not very good at drawing people sitting down. Also, I forgot to ink a bunch of lines in the background and ended up doing it in Photoshop. Hopefully this will be something of a lesson for me in spreading my work out more and not trying to do everything in two nights. You would think I'd have this figured out by now, but things just never seem to work out the way they're supposed to, and everything gets left until the last minute.

Anyway, self deprecation aside, thank you for your continued support of the strip. I will be back soon enough with another update!



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